Sick of the same old holiday stories?

In Rimu 2 Miss Koorey was a bit sick of writing holiday stories at the beginning of every term. We decided to write them as blog posts instead. Writing for the internet is slightly different then writing for a book.

You need to include the following things:

1. A catchy title.... "Can you make friends with a goat?"

2. Short snappy sentences that are written like you are talking.

3. A question at the end to make the reader think or write a comment.

4. Details to keep someone interested in your blog post. 

How well do you think we have done this? Please write a comment telling us if we have done any of these things.